Monday 11 March 2013

2nd Drafts


 
 





2 comments:

  1. Try top cover with white text.
    Move price to sit on top of barcode.
    New frames don't work on contents.
    Why can't we see girls face in second image.
    Add page number.
    Margin needs to be same on both sides of text (dps).
    Make pull quote slightly smaller on left-don't overlap image.
    Columns need to be same length.

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  2. On the dps make the drop capital (U) significantly larger. Look at Billy Rayboulds for help.

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